I just want to briefly speak to score.
To be honest, I don’t hear really much of anything in the first half of this spot. I think our entire focus needs to be on the words being said, and not be muddled with any emotional suggestiveness that score can often bring.
On the back half though, maybe something worth thinking about is a minimal, emotional, ambient score to help break the tension of our shift and ease us into what will be the tender moments in the finale of the spot.
I will link a suggestion here to talk about in the call. This artist is licensable and would be within our budget as costs for non-profit films usually remain low.